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雅思口语最大的悲伤:考官以为你在背诵(番外二)

时间:2019-08-12 15:25  作者:jnlongre  来源:未知  

摘要:这期继续从 雅思口语 考试内容上分析一下考官会以为你在背诵的几点迹象,整理不易,欢迎大家分享讨论。 d. And explain why it was a positive change 观点:我开始转变自己对待生活的态度,开始健康的生活方式 解释:以前总是抱怨交通问题让我迟到,被扣工

这期继续从雅思口语考试内容上分析一下考官会以为你在背诵的几点迹象,整理不易,欢迎大家分享讨论。
d. And explain why it was a positive change

观点:我开始转变自己对待生活的态度,开始健康的生活方式

解释:以前总是抱怨交通问题让我迟到,被扣工资

拓展:现在能够适应环境,能够更好的利用早上的时间,乘坐地铁更加省钱,因为错开了高峰期,地铁不是那么拥挤,有时间在地铁上看一下新闻,听半小时英语
I started to change my own attitudes toward my work and life, and also tend to lead a healthy lifestyle.I used to complain other factors like transport congestion,which may result in lateness and salary deduction.But now,I could adapt to working environments and take advantage of my commuting time in the subway,where I could read some newspapers and listen to English radios.Actually, the early metro was not packed with people and I also saved money on fuel.

点评:

问题5:使用词伙的时候,没有解释,前后不匹配

I started to change my own attitudes toward my work and life,and also tend to lead a healthy lifestyle.

这句话里面突然提到了change one`s attitude towards life前面没有提到,也没有解释,因为这件事情,人生观都改变了,雅思口语考试考官怎么听都觉得很奇怪。

词伙lead a heathy lifestyle很多人都用,它不仅仅指早起,还有饮食,运动,所以用在这里不恰当。

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问题6:时态错误,导致事情描述的时间段不合理

the early metro was not packed with people and I also saved money on fuel之前说我有了一个积极的改变,那么现在描述的就是改变后的状态,是现在发生的事情,应该用现在时。这个地方的早班地铁没有人挤,我也存钱这些事应该用一般时态而不是用过去时。

修改后范文a. What the change was

The change I'd like to talk about is the habit of getting up early in the morning an showing up for work on time.I am an office worker,and I need to arrive at my company before half past eight,but because of traffic jams in the norning rush hour,I was always late.
1.扣题the change I'd like to talk about
2.并列句衔接,衔接自然

b. When it happened

I wasn't to find a solution to this problem until a new colleague joined the company.She was hired this June and worked hard.To my surprise,she is never late for work even though she lives far away from the office.
3.扣题I wasn't able to find a solution to this problem until,暗示了possitive change的发生
c. How it happened

Out of curiosity, I talked to her, and she told me that it was her habit of getting up early in the morning that allowed her to avoid the rush hour traffic and arrive at the office before everybody else. She also tried to take public transport, catching the first train, rathe than drive to the workplace, because there is a lot uncertainly over a car journey, such as car accients, road construction.
4.雅思口语口语化表达talk to her

5.能够早起的好处是比别人早到arrive at the office before everybody else

6.car accidentsroad construction来具体化a lot of uncertainly

d. And explain why it was a positive change

I have basically followed her advice.But now, I have developed good bedtime routine. I go to bed before 10 and wake up before 6.I no longer need to set an alarm. Daily commuting is also more enjoyable. On the subway, I could read some newspaper and listen to English radio programmes. Acutally, the early metro is not packed with people.
7.开头说明了积极地改变I have basically followed her advice

8.词伙用的恰当develop good bedtime routine,早起的好处是睡眠作息时间,后面用I go bed before 10 and wake up before 6. I no longer need to set an alarm.

9.时态使用正确

说了这么多,不知烤鸭们了解了多少,虽然雅思口语考试的考官们对背诵深恶痛绝,但是他们大多数还是善良的,他们更相信我们不是单纯背诵的。毕竟英语不是我们的母语,他们对我们的要求也不是那么严格的。

以上就是小编整理的雅思口语最大的悲伤:考官以为你在背诵(番外二),希望对大家有所帮助。济南雅思培训就选济南朗阁。更多详情可以点击我们的在线老师进行咨询哦!

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