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济南朗阁名师带你分析雅思作文题(上)

时间:2016-03-25 14:17  作者:济南朗阁  来源:济南朗阁  

摘要:当拿到一道雅思大作文题目时,雅思考生们应该如何分析?其实,要分析好一道雅思大作文题目,考生们需要考虑到方方面面。

  当拿到一道雅思大作文题目时,雅思考生们应该如何分析?其实,要分析好一道雅思大作文题目,考生们需要考虑到方方面面。

  雅思考生们不仅仅需要去读懂题目本身的意思,同时还得了解题目所涉及的是哪一类雅思作文话题,它所考察的是一个什么能力,题目中是否有一些关键词需要格外注意以及对于这道题目所能想到的一些观点论证。在本系列文章中,济南朗阁老师将和雅思考生们一起探讨两道典型的雅思大作文教育类话题。

  As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  审题:

  题目翻译:作为教育的一部分,学生应该要花一段时间去海外学习和生活来学习当地的语言和文化。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?

  能力考查:这个雅思大作文教育类话题是同意不同意的考试指令,考查雅思考生对于考官所呈现的社会现象或所表达的观点是否能够清晰地给出自己的想法并加以有效论证。一般来讲,碰到这种指令,理论上是可以写完全支持或者反对的,但是还是建议雅思考生尽量尝试用折中的写法,即部分同意部分反对。这种一分为二的思考方式可以在雅思写作考场上帮助你快速想出观点并进行有效作答,另外这种答题模式也不太会发生偏题的情况。

  框架构造:Partly agree

  1. 开头段(用于引出题目背景,并且表明自己的态度)

  2. 论证出国学习和生活对于学习语言和文化的重要性

  3. 但是,反面论证这种做法对于部分学生是不现实的

  4. 结尾(再次重申自己的观点,并且可以给出自己的建议)

  Sample answer:

  Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL. Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition. As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.

  Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes. Compared with second-hand experience, living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market. Meanwhile, living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief.

  However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it. First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers. Tuition fees and life expenses can be another problem. Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas. For example, studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.

  To sum up, an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well. However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.

  思路分析:

  Introduction:

  Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL.(用最熟悉的事件引出背景)Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition.(对于题目的改写)As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.(在段落的最后,用一句话表明出自己的观点)

  Body 1:

  主题句:Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes.(其中mentioned purposes指的是题目中的掌握语言和文化,为了避免重复,改用其他方式来表达)

  支撑论点部分:Compared with second-hand experience, (用了对比论证手法,强调国外生活与学习的好处)living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market.(凸显对于语言的好处,使用了因果论证来说明语言的重要性) Meanwhile,(论点之间的连接词) living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief. (论证了对于文化的帮助,使用including来举出文化的一些典型表现)。

  Body 2:

  主题句:However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it.(用however转折连接词引出与上段不同的看法,指出了一部分特殊的学生不利于海外学习,这样就体现出了逻辑上的缜密)

  支撑论点部分:

  ① First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers.(第一个论点,指出语言能力差的学生不适合出国学习,使用的是因果论证)

  ② Tuition fees and life expenses can be another problem. Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas. For example, studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.(第二个分论点,指出家庭经济条件不好的学生也不适合出国学习,用for example引出了典型的举例论证)

  Conclusion:

  To sum up,(段落结尾常见连接词) an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well. However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.(个人观点的重述加上适当的建议)

  以上我们先为雅思考生们分析了其中一道雅思大作文真题,在下一篇中,济南朗阁老师将继续为雅思考生们分析另外一道雅思大作文真题,雅思考生们千万不要错过哦~

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