摘要：在紧张的时间内又快又准地写好雅思大作文的开头无疑为整篇作文打响了第一炮，考生自己的信心和专注度也会倍增。可是，万事开头难，如何在有限的时间内(通常2-3分钟)给文章开一个切题、简明的好头那?本文中，朗阁海外考试研究中心的老师将介绍一些实用高效的套
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在紧张的时间内又快又准地写好朗阁雅思大作文的开头无疑为整篇作文打响了第一炮，考生自己的信心和专注度也会倍增。可是，万事开头难，如何在有限的时间内(通常2-3分钟)给文章开一个切题、简明的好头那?本文中，朗阁海外考试研究中心的老师将介绍一些实用高效的套路，让你快狠准地轻松完成大作文首段。
P.S.：对于本文，思维广底子强的学霸完全可以按照自己的套路来。本文仅是提供一些朗阁雅思作文首段的实用写法，具体第一段呈现出来的效果，还得看各位烤鸭自己用词的精准度，以及语句流畅性等基本功。
朗阁雅思作文首段推荐结构：
简洁明了切题的第一段，主要包含下面三大部分：引言句——引出话题、同义转化考题和明确表述观点
1.引言句 —— 引出话题
文章刚开始，直接说考试话题过于突兀，前面加上一到两句引言句过渡下，引出话题则会好很多，这里介绍两种实用的引言句写法。
1).追溯原因写引言句
顾名思义，从朗阁雅思大作文所讨论的话题中想产生此话题现象的原因，把它当引言句，顺理成章地引出话题，这个方式适合绝大多数大作文考题，考生可以看下面例子。
例子1：
It is common to see that people use the mobile phone everywhere in modern society. Do the advantages outweigh its advantages?
话题现象：
people use the mobile phone 人们使用手机
原因分析：
人们广泛使用手机的原因是什么呢，下面是一个常见原因——现在科技繁荣，电子行业飞速发展，手机已经被各行个业的人们广泛运用。
The modern society has witnessed the prosperity of science and technology, which causes a dramatic increase in a series of electronic innovations. Mobile phones have been used by people in all trades and fields.
例子2：
Some people think a language should be taught in a small class, others believe learning language in big class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
话题现象：
在小班/大班学习语言
原因分析：
本题要考生讨论的是语言学习是在小班好还是大班好，学生部分选择小班or大班最直白的原因可以是：现在学校/教育机构提供不同的班级让学生选择。下面是一个常见的原因——当代社会，各色培训教育尤其是语言培训如雨后春笋般冒出来，它们提供不同规模的班级课。
In current days, the educational institutions especially language learning institutions spring up everywhere, and there are several kinds of classes for language learners.
2 ).具体重申写引言(多用于 report 文章)
顾名思义，把朗阁雅思大作文的话题扩充得具体一点，上义词加入一些下义词，然后引入讨论，多用于朗阁雅思写作report, 具体请看下面的例子。
例子1：
Research suggests young people are committing crimes, what do you think of this case? What can be done to solve this problem?
话题现象：
青少年犯罪young people are committing crimes
重申此现象：
这里可以将committing crimes具体化，具体到青少年犯了些什么罪，引发了哪些后果。下面是常见的一个重申——诸如毁坏公物，偷车兜风等青少年常见的犯罪不仅害己，还危害社会和谐。
The common teenage crimes and anti-social behaviors including vandalism and joy-riding not only do harm to themselves, but also jeopardize the harmonious society.
例子2：
There are several languages becoming extinct every year. What is the reason? How to protect the endangered languages?
话题现象：每年有一些语言消亡
重申此现象：
同理这里可以具体列举一些languages, 如小语种，地方方言，一些少数名族语言。下面是常见的一个重申——一些不被大范围使用的语言诸如少数名族语言，地方方言等正面临灭绝。
At present, some languages which are only used in a small scale such as local dialects and minority languages are near extinction.
2. 同义转化考题
完成第一步引言，这一步考题同义转化就相对比较容易轻松，把朗阁雅思大作文中要讨论的点按照自己的话再说一遍，简单有效切题。如下是两个实用的考题改写套路，供各位考生学习。
1). 句式一
Some people asserts /claims …A…,
while others cast doubt on it by saying that...B...
are skeptical about
question / challenge
一些人觉得…，然而其他人质疑…
例子：It is common to see that people use the mobile phone everywhere in modern society. Do the advantages outweigh its advantages?(手机利弊问题)
改写：Some people asserts mobile phone is beneficial to us, while others cast doubt on it, by saying that this electronic device exerts negative effects.
2). 句式二
Whether … A … or … B … has been discussed
The issue of whether … A … or … B … has arisen
是否…A…还是…B…已经被热烈的讨论了
例子2：
Some people think a language should be taught in a small class, others believe learning language in big class does not matter. discuss both views and give your opinion.
改写：
Whether students, in terms of language learning, can obtain more advantages in a small class or in a big class has been discussed.
3. 明确表述观点
好的开头，尤其是看到最后，能让考官立即明了作者的观点，在这里还是推荐广大考生在首段最后明确表述一下自己的观点，下面是几种实用的表明开头的方法。
1). 中规中矩型
简言之，老老实实最后表明自己观点，自己支持哪一边，这种貌似没有多少新意，但是扎扎实实最直白，下面是一些推荐句式
From my perspective/in my point of view, …
As for me / Personally, …
+
I hold a belief that …
I side with the former/latter
I am strongly in favor of …
2). 峰回路转型
简言之，前面夸赞话题讨论的“一个面”，营造出一种立马要同意“这个面”的感觉，突然峰回路转，自己是反对“这个面”的，同意其相对面，这样能勾起朗阁雅思考官继续往下看，一探究竟的兴趣。下面是一些推荐写法：
This proposal seems feasible. However, I still firmly believe ……………..
Although we can benefit a lot from xxx, its drawbacks still prevail over its merits.
这些表示转折的连接词，有冲击力：
例子1：
Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what do you agree or disagree?
中规中矩的观点：From my perspective, I firmly believe that this measure definitely will not increase road safety.
峰回路转的观点：This proposal seems feasible. However, personally, I do not believe that it does work.
3). 其他 ( 适用于 report 作文题)
朗阁雅思大作文中report本身出题频率不多，首段结尾一般清晰表明自己的目的“解释现象原因+给出措施”即可。
下面是一些推荐句式：
This essay aims to explore the possible reasons of … why …
+ and then present my personal recommendations /measures
例子1：
Research suggests young people are committing crimes, what do you think of this case? What can be done to solve this problem?
观点句：
This essay aims to explore why the young generation often violate the laws, and then present my personal recommendations.
只要用好上面的步骤，相信一段简明切题的朗阁雅思作文开头便能完成。迅速在2-3分钟内快狠准地写好一个开头，为全文奠定一个好的基础，相对来说后文就更容易写得行云流水了。对于广大考生来说，可以好好研究一下本文介绍的一些方法套路，同时丰富自己的词汇以及精准度，语句流畅性逻辑性等基本功，一定能够取得满意的朗阁雅思写作成绩。
